From the Bottom of their Hearts

Hello, everyone,

Do you remember the post about my Level 1 students? This time, you will see how my Level 6 students write. These students have been taking English since around two and and a half years ago and most of them want to teach the language in the future. In separate activities, they wrote about a city they now, an imaginary invention and an activity they like. They started by quick writing. Then they revised and edited their paragraphs. These are some paragraphs that resulted from those activities. Is there any idea pointed out by Lisandro that motivated you to visit the second largest city in the Dominican Republic? Did Angelica come up with a totally new invention? Does the last paragraph show that Pablo really likes to shop online? Share your answers with them, please. 

 SANTIAGO

By Lisandro

Santiago is a beautiful and sophisticated city. It has some nice and expensive restaurants. In Santiago, there are big and luxurious hotels with an excellent service. The people there are so good with the tourists. The transportation system is one of the most efficient in the Dominican Republic. If you are a tourist and you want to cook any kind of food from your country, don't worry about the ingredients. Santiago has great markets where you can buy items from whatever country all over the world. Keep in mind that Santiago has it all.

MAGIC PEN

By Angelica

The Magic pen is a school item that can write for you. It is an electronic pen with a microphone included. You just have to tell the pen what to write and the pen is going to write what you want automatically. It is good when you have to do your homework. For example, when you have to write a summary, you do not have any problem. Just start to speak about your topic and the pen is going to do your job.

ONLINE CLOTHES SHOPPING

By Pablo

The use of Online Clothes Shopping is a good way to get clothes when you cannot go to a store. In this kind of shopping, you just write your clothes information like size, color and style. Likewise, you write the type of item you want to buy. In fact, there are hundreds of Online Clothes Shopping webpages such as eBay, Macy’s, Jc penny, and others. Furthermore, some online stores have delivery service. Nowadays, you can buy everything online.