Hello, everyone,
Do you remember the post about my Level 1 students? This time, you will see how my Level 6 students write. These students have been taking English since around two and and a half years ago and most of them want to teach the language in the future. In separate activities, they wrote about a city they now, an imaginary invention and an activity they like. They started by quick writing. Then they revised and edited their paragraphs. These are some paragraphs that resulted from those activities. Is there any idea pointed out by Lisandro that motivated you to visit the second largest city in the Dominican Republic? Did Angelica come up with a totally new invention? Does the last paragraph show that Pablo really likes to shop online? Share your answers with them, please.
SANTIAGO
By Lisandro
Santiago is a beautiful and
sophisticated city. It has some nice and expensive restaurants. In Santiago, there
are big and luxurious hotels with an excellent service. The people there are so
good with the tourists. The transportation system is one of the most efficient
in the Dominican Republic. If you are a tourist and you want to cook any kind
of food from your country, don't worry about the ingredients. Santiago has
great markets where you can buy items from whatever country all over the world.
Keep in mind that Santiago has it all.
By Angelica
The Magic pen is a school
item that can write for you. It is an electronic pen with a microphone included.
You just have to tell the pen what to write and the pen is going to write what
you want automatically. It is good when you have to do your homework. For
example, when you have to write a summary, you do not have any problem. Just
start to speak about your topic and the pen is going to do your job.
ONLINE
CLOTHES SHOPPING
By Pablo
The use of Online Clothes
Shopping is a good way to get clothes when you cannot go to a store. In this
kind of shopping, you just write your clothes information like size, color and
style. Likewise, you write the type of item you want to buy. In fact, there are
hundreds of Online Clothes Shopping webpages such as eBay, Macy’s,
Jc penny, and others. Furthermore, some online stores have delivery service.
Nowadays, you can buy everything online.
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