Wednesday, August 2, 2017

FIRST SEMESTER-2017 TWO MORE ENGLISH COMPOSITION I STUDENT ESSAYS

These are two more essays written by my English Composition I students. what do think of Ramón and Randielis's essays?


MY YARD
By Ramon Daniel Martinez Henriquez

      A very important place for families is their yard. If they live in a house, they have one most of the time. They can have gatherings there like parties, barbecues, birthdays parties, or just have fun with friends. Besides, families use the yard for keeping animals, having a garden, or even playing some sports like baseball, basketball, boxing, or any other. My yard is just a space where you can stay and enjoy yourself. It has some elements in it that I love which are the wildlife, the green area, and the boxing area.
       My yard green area is great to stay in. First, I can transport my mind to another world. To the left there is an amazing mango tree covering part of the yard. I love to see it. Next to it, there are some plantain trees. They are so green. To the left, there is a small guava tree. It is very strong. The grass and the passion fruit tree are in the middle of the yard. Another element that makes the beauty of my yard is the coconut tree behind the guava tree. The coconut tree is very high and strong. It gives a big shadow to the yard, making it a better place. Also to the left, next to the guava tree, there is another passion fruit covering the guava tree. An interesting thing that also makes it a nice place for staying in is that the yard and the house are in a quiet area. All of these elements like the trees, grass, and green plants just add a beautiful view from every corner of the yard. You can turn your mind off and enjoy the amazing yard of my house.
         Similar to the green area, the wildlife in my yard is amazing to see. First, it keeps my yard alive. When you go there, you will like it for sure. There are some animals there. There are a dog, a rabbit, and a hen. Those are not the only visible animals in my yard. There are different insects. For example, there are ants, ladybugs, butterflies, dragonflies, praying mantis, and mosquitoes. Sometimes, you can also see a mouse around the yard and it is funny when my neighbor's cat is chasing it. My favorite part is to see the birds and hear them sing. I enjoy listening to every single sound that they make. Another interesting part of it is to see how the wildlife is distributed in the whole yard, especially in front and behind the boxing area because it is so green and perfect for insects. Other insects that lives in my yard are spiders. The reason why my yard is so alive is because my father really loves wildlife and always takes care of it. He loves our dog, Dockie. It is a good dog. Sometimes it is hard to listen to a dog barking to the birds or to everything that moves the whole day. The wildlife in my yard is unique and fun to see. If you have the chance to stay in, you will probably love it.
       My favorite area in my yard is the boxing area. First, the boxing area was built by me. I really love boxing and exercises. I can go there and just do my boxing routine. The boxing area is in the right side of my yard in the garage. I have a black sandbag there. I love to hit it every day, usually at 4:00 pm. I also have some more equipment like a truck's wheel, four pairs of boxing gloves and a big radio with a list of techno and electronic music. I listen to it for motivating myself to get warm when I am starting my practice. The boxing area isn't beautiful or a very attractive place, but for me it has a big value. I don't care that the floor is just pavement or that it doesn't have any paint. I see it like the best place where I can be for traveling to a powerful and energetic place. I don't use to take people there. It is a private place, but my neighbor sometimes goes there. I love to sweat right there and give my best in every punch that I throw or when I am doing my shadow. I enjoy every part of it such as the way that I move and the beauty of the place. Definitely, I love it. For me it is a magical place, bigger than Disneyland or any other special place for children or adults. Being there makes me happy and energetic. That is the reason why my boxing area if my favorite place in my yard. If you love boxing just like me, for sure you will love the boxing area in my yard.
      A yard is very important to a family, and especially because is a place where to have a lot of memories and hopefully, a lot of fun. If you have a chance to have one, you should start looking for your favorite parts of it. Do just like I did. For me, those parts are the wildlife, the green area, and the boxing area. In my opinion, my yard is a place where I love to stay in, even more than inside my house.


Nagua 2017

MY YARD
By Randielis j. Vargas Mayi

The yard is the most glamorous and affective part in my house. The yard is the best place to stay in a quiet moment. It offers the peace that you need. The yard is the place where my family and I spend time together sharing every Sunday. Not only can my family have an unforgettable day in my yard, but also me. When I have some problems, the yard is the best place to go and breathe. The yard is the place in which I can enjoy nature, a green area, some wildlife, and the infrastructure that it contains. It is the best part to discover and disconnect myself from the rest of the world and appreciate this place without interruptions.
 First, there is an important place in my house. It is a green area, which is the most interesting thing in my house. You can have a marvelous day in this great place. Over there, you can breathe like nobody because you are in a natural place. If you are there, you feel like you have never felt before. It is as if you were flying and relaxed at the same time. This green area has different types of flowers located around the house. Some of the trees are mango, tuna, cherry, guava, oak, floating, apple, and orange. One awesome thing about the flowers is that they are growing a lot. They are prettier every day. When you are there, you can notice that the breeze moves the trees and the flowers from side to side and you feel as if that place is your secret home. There, you can thrush and describe everything that is happening to you in that moment. The breath and the trees together communicate the peace and the quiet that you need. For that reason, the green area in my yard is the best thing in my house.
Besides a green area there is another significant part. Animals are the most meaningful creatures that make the wildlife astounding in my yard. In my yard, there are animals like dogs, a cat, hens, chickens, a cow, birds, lizards, and insects. The dogs are yellow and black, and they are around the house. There are two big dogs and one little dog. The cat is white and black, and it has a lot hair in his body.  When the cat passes near you, your skin prickles right away. The birds are black, orange, pink, green, red, and white. They are always flying near the trees. The lizards are green and the area around the house and the trees all the time. The yard has some insect`s hives where you can notice that they are working all together for keeping and staying alive. There is a cow, and it is white and black, without horns. It is very heavy and big. The hens are black, gray, white, and orange. There are big and heavy with excellent feathers. Chickens are black, gray, red, orange, and white. The chickens are smaller than hens, but they are pretty, too. They eat corn, rice, bread, and beans. Animals transmit you the extraordinary peace that you want in some moments.
 Another incredible part in my yard is the infrastructures, which are dissevered by two places. One of this is a room to the left side of the yard, which is divided by two parts. It is a big room. It is like a house, and there are three rooms in it. These infrastructures are made of blocks, cement, rods, wood, and zinc. Near the bathroom and the restroom are four trees. They were made in 1978. They are not big, in the inside, they are pink and gray, and in the outside, they are only pink. The doors are black and pink. Inside the restroom, there are a wheel and two sacks. One has bottles and the other one has clothes in it. In the bathroom, we have a shelf on the wall in which I put the products that I use. In the right side of the yard, there is the biggest room. It is separated by three parts. On the back of these rooms, there are two burners. Next to them, there is a room for fire wood, and they are near of some trees. Inside of the rooms, there are sacks, diesel oil, a freezer, and products for the plantations. In the other two rooms, we have sacks, two tractors, plantains, bananas, wood, tables, and tractors utensils. In front of the rooms, there is a lamp and around it, there are nice plantations and trees. The most interesting thing about that is we can enjoy and get together as a family in this part of the yard.
In conclusion, the yard is a fantastic place in my house, in which I can have an exceptional access to nature. One fascinating part in my yard is a green area, in which I can enjoy the breeze and feel as if I were in another world. Besides the green area, there is another amazing part or my yard, some wildlife that make the yard an astonishing place. Finally, there is another big part in my yard, which is infrastructure. The yard is the most comfortable place for being free. If you are looking for a peaceful place to be relaxed, the yard in my house is the best one.

SAN FRANCISCO DE MACORÍS 2017

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